Once I give you your edited piece of writing back, make the changes I told you about and then look and see if there are any changes YOU think you should make. After you make those changes too, I want to see it again. Everyone must turn in their REVISED 500 words on Sunday, September 29th.
Remember to look at your reference sheet about writing. It's the one that looks like this:
Remember to look at your reference sheet about writing. It's the one that looks like this: